Analysis of my feedback

From my questionnaires I asked participants to rate my video I found that-

I would like to improve this rating as much as possible. To do this I will need to make some corrections such as -

• increase the pace of my video by adding quicker cuts between shots
• increase the variety of shots that I use, add in more close ups
• change colours on some shots, for example studio,instrument and narrative shots
• quicken the end of my video
• make sure all instruments are in time and cuts are not jumpy

By making these amendments and further changes from my teachers feedback and also my own changes that I dislike about the video, I hope that I will be able to meet the needs of my target audience and if this product were to sell they would buy it.