Teachers feedback on first draft

Overall our teacher gave us positive feedback on our video and said that he believed it fitted into the genre well. However the things that we need to improve are -

• Make sure all instruments are in time with the music
• To increase the pace throughout
• To create a distinction between chorus and verse 
• To add more split screens into the video increasing link with the rest of my products
• To brighten and quicken narrative clips 
• To alter colours throughout the video 

We have our own corrections that we want to make to improve our video so hopefully once all changes have been made we will produce an effective professional video.