Improvements from feedback

I am very pleased with the feedback that i received regarding my ancillary task and glad that my focus group believed that it could be a Kook product.

However they mentioned some areas that they weren't pleased with and I am now going to change these -

POSTER -

My focus group reported back to me that the dates were difficult to read, so to improve this I will move them off centre and try to put them where the picture has the whiter background so that they stand out better.














They also found the copyright at the bottom of the poster difficult to read so I will change this to a brighter font.


FRONT COVER -

They found the font at the bottom was a bit too much and detracted from the over all attractiveness of my piece. To improve this I will remove some of the text and limit what is at the bottom of the front cover.

PAMPHLET - My focus group didn't report badly but some changes i'm going to make are -
To move the font so there are even gaps and where text overlaps the images change the colour of the font so it is clearer to read.